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I read most of it and liked what I read so far. I got to the end of chapter two and promise I will read that when i find time. ...

I'm into The Legend of Zelda and know all about the games but am left confused after reading this. Maybe it's just me because I'm tired but I just don't ...

I liked it and hope there is more. My advice to you is to add more detail.

I haven't written any poetry in a long time so I'm pretty rusty. Sorry it it's not my best. I live in a world of black and white with occasional ...

I love the update and what I've just read. The girl is very cute sounding and the mother is interesting. I kind of got lost somewhere between being in the ...

This was interesting to read. I'm not usually into reading stuff like this but I'm willing to give it a shot. Can't wait to read more.

Disturbing much? Please tell me that she was not immitating what happens between her and her father when he asks her if she wants to play. I mean she talks ...

It went too fast without any real detail. If it weren't going so fast it would have been interesting but then it just ended. I'm thinking what? It sounds like ...

Creepy! It's interesting but it needs a bit more detail. Can't wait to read more.

*Screams* Oh my god I love it. I wish there was more. I think that was the perfect ending. I can't to read something else of yours.

I'm glad to read more. I couldn't exactly remember what was going on so I had to read the previous chapters to get back into the story. I agree with ...

Ive read all three chapters and have to say that it is interesting and I can't wait to read more. I like Jamie's character...she reminds me of a lot of ...

What an attention grabber. The title and then the first few paragraphs of it. Wow. I really loved it and hope there will be more like it to read. True ...

The holy ghost isn't exactly what i was looking for. But i believe in the holy ghost. I'm pentecostal and it's part of our belief of one of the three ...

1. You know you're going to have a bad day when you wake up the morning after your wedding to find a stranger in your bed. 2. You find out ...